You relight the fuse and walk away
It’s your heart, not mine that you betray
This barrier, I must break through
Again, my thoughts return to you
I’m all aflame with your memory
You’re the only cure, my remedy
These words of mine, I know I’ll rue
Again, my thoughts return to you
Unbend your mind, no need to fear
True love and soul mates trump the years
What more am I supposed to do?
Again, my thoughts return to you
~ kei
8 October 2015
Day eight in the Kyrielle form
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OctPoWriMo 2015
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you brought back memories of shear freedom, the open road, and a special someone.
a heartfelt poem
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Smiles. Thank you so much Eddie ❤
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Nicely done .. I do so love a well-written kyrielle!
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Thanks so much! I loved this form, it’s very similar to writing song lyrics. The flow and repeat. I’m excited to try another!
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I agree, I think I like the Kyrielle Sonnet a tad better both are fantastic forms (even if I’ve personalized a couple whilst learning the form 😉 )
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I’m going to start calling you “The Poetry Enabler”! My goal for OPWM is to try new forms and it’s just got longer with the Kyrielle Sonnet 🙂
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this resonates so deeply with me. betrayal.
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Smiles. Thank you so much, glad you connected with the words.
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Precious love!
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I know so little of poetic form. Im off to learn…thanks for teaching…such a great poem!
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Smiles. Thank you so much! I’m learning too, it’s one of the things I like best about these challenges 🙂
Thank you for your visit 🙂
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Very touching; I really enjoyed this one 🙂
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Smiles. Thank you.
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What a beautiful connect in remembering a precious love.
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It’s amazing how we remember soul mates, even if they are gone. Thank you so much for visiting 🙂
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Karin, this is lovely. Brava! ♥
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Thank you so much! K~xx
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Beautiful. I do believe that this is the type of poem that most everyone can relate to. 🙂
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Smiles. Thank you. K~xx
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Kyrielle…thanks for the introduction. I quite enjoyed this form of poetry. You did a lovely job of it. I looked it up:)
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Thank you so much! I was glad I gave this form a try, it felt a little like writing a song. So glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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