That’s beautiful! It’s a great use of the form–the way one sentence runs into the other. It’s very finely crafted. And it’s powerfully sensory for its ever so small dimensions (the way a haiku ought to be), like a single spritz of intoxicating perfume; and so deliciously sensual.
Thank you so much for your kind words. Haiku is one of my favourite forms, both to write and to read. Your visit and lovely comment are much appreciated. ~ kei
يا صديقتي اذا بليتم فستترو
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That’s beautiful! It’s a great use of the form–the way one sentence runs into the other. It’s very finely crafted. And it’s powerfully sensory for its ever so small dimensions (the way a haiku ought to be), like a single spritz of intoxicating perfume; and so deliciously sensual.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Haiku is one of my favourite forms, both to write and to read. Your visit and lovely comment are much appreciated. ~ kei
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oh wow 🙂
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🙂
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