Voyeur

You’d like to watch
You want to see
The particular way
That I pleasure me

Your mouth goes dry
Thoughts keeps you awake
You picture my fingers
The path they might take

Read between these lines
Form a picture in your mind

You’re curious about
The feel of my skin
Breathing quickens, catches
You see velvet friction

Your thoughts conjure
Each stoke, caress and tease
You hear my voice in your head
And my sweet release

Read between these lines
Form a picture in your mind

Feeling liquid flame
I’m curious too
Heated by the image
Of how you… love you

The thought is a turn on
I have to confess
Turnabout is fair play
Baby, get undressed

~ kei
23 February 2014

Gypsophilia by Cristiana Gasparotto

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5 thoughts on “Voyeur

  1. I like your invitation but find the words hard to find in an order that would allude openly enough without being explicit – explicit in the obvious sense – not in the intimate sense…

    Something about the distanced nature of blogging lets you imagine to share something you would generally think not to – but the idea is exciting in that it elicits a tickling little wave of sensations resonant of those very moments.. something akin to the awareness that a need tickles under your skin, the answer to which would be the answer to your question…

    Interestingly maybe its a question I now don’t answer, almost at all, given that it tends to confound a real moment with a real person to whom my answers are often long and drawn out rather verbose little essays.. she likes to read and re-read them more often than I am used to.. her comprehension seems fine but maybe she searched thoroughly for meaning in her reading of me..

    So while I send these words I come to frame thoughts feeling to take for myself comes like be like stealing something from her..

    in the past my answers were often too brief, lacking depth – but this reader has a unique way of taking meaning leaving things elusive yet with a strong physicality that requires some surrender some departure some sense of self confidence and maybe not a little release from the bounds of the expected..

    much like your poem

    thank you

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    • Yours may be one of the most beautifully complex responses that I’ve ever received to a piece that I’ve written. The erotica I write is not usually as well received as my more traditional offerings.
      Thank you so much for taking the time to visit here, to read and the lovely comment. ~kei

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      • Well you caught me with your poem in exactly the right spot… 🙂 this is the beauty of words – especially those with the space between to combine well the intent of the writer with however the reader is in that exact moment of reading.. what happens there is best left unknowably beyond explanation..

        yours were beautiful too.. very.. 🙂

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      • Thank you so much. So glad that they resonated with you. As a writer, I want that; to either give voice to thoughts someone doesn’t or can’t express or simply to pen aspects of the shared human experience that some of us have. I look forward to reading more of your thoughts in the future.

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